Tuesday, January 15, 2008

Comments For Split Shift Page 5

I asked for some feed back and some people felt that the flash symbols were not done well, so I though I'd try straight line art.

I do like the color, but it takes extra time.

As is predictable, Amy and Misty will become room mates. Originally they were going to start the comic as room mates, but I though it would be more interesting to see how they meet.


Some people though the jokes just weren't working and that I need to establish the characters a bit more. I'll spend the next few strips letting the characters get to know each other. I'll try a more cartoon approach and see how that works. I think I'll use this comic to experiment with for a while and see how it goes.

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