It took me a little longer to update this page then the others, mainly because this is the worst page of the bunch. Not only was it just a bunch of talking heads, but the words didn't really convey the emotional content of the scene.As you can see, I've completely rewritten the dialogue. If you don't remember the old text, just click on the image and scroll to the bottom of the page to see the older version.
I've also added backgrounds to make the pages more interesting to look at. Add to all that, the better quality artwork, and you have a vast improvement all around. It's pages like this that I've wanted to fix for a long time. It's about time I got around to it.
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